Presentation

Revision

Punctation

This slides punctuation can be improved by having full stops at the end of the first paragraph and the third one.

    Grammar

  This issue with this slide on the prezi is that the grammar as in the texts there is a sentence that does not make sense which is in the first sentence with the word then that causes the sentence to make no sense.

Spelling

This paragraph in my Prezi has error as I have misspelt the words comissoner as I have added in an extra M when there is only one. The other word that I have misspelt is the word nationaly at the end of the sentence but i have spelt it wrong by having the letters T when it should be the letter L instead.

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The issues with this slide in the Prezi is the words This i can replace the word is as i have used for my other paragraph so instead i can replace that word with Also because that is a better way to start a new paragraph